Thursday, 27 October 2016
ModPo - Week 10 – some trends in recent poetry: conceptualism and unoriginality.
In week 10 there was an introduction of
Conceptualism and unoriginality. There are some writers like: Kenneth
Goldsmith, Christian Bok, Caroline Bergvall and many more.
In this blog I have just given brief
introduction of Goldsmith’s work from ModPo course.
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1) “Soliloquy”
by Kenneth Goldsmith
In ModPo course “Act 1” has discussed well.
It is a book which contains poetry. Here is one description of the book by
author,
Author description:
Soliloquy is an unedited document of every word I spoke during the week
of April 15-21, 1996, from the moment I woke up Monday morning to the moment I
went to sleep on Sunday night. To accomplish this, I wore a hidden
voice-activated tape recorder. I transcribed Soliloquy during the summer
of 1996 at the Chateau Bionnay in Lacenas, France, during a residency there. It
took 8 weeks, working 8 hours a day. Soliloquy was first realized as a
gallery exhibition at Bravin Post Lee in Soho during April of 1997.
Subsequently, the gallery published the text in a limited edition of 50. In the
fall of 2001, Granary Books published a trade edition of the text. The web
version of Soliloquy contains the exact text from the 281-page original
book version, but due to the architecture of the web, each chapter is
sub-divided into 10 parts. And, of course, the textual treatment of the web
version is indeed web-specific and perhaps more truly references the
ephemerality of language as reflected by the book's epigraph: "If every
word spoken in New York City daily / were somehow to materialize as a
snowflake, / each day there would be a blizzard." In order to achieve this
effect, the web version is available only to users of Microsoft Internet
Explorer and Netscape 6+. Unfortunately, none of the prior versions of Netscape
support the CSS tag used here: "a { text-decoration: none }" ; to
view the piece in web form without this function enabled would be to ruin the
intended experience of this work.
The “Act 1” is very long and for further reading
you can visit Modpo websites. I suggest enrolling the course for interesting
poetry reading and understanding.
ModPo - Week - 9 - Some trends in recent poetry: Chance
In week 9 there was an interesting task by instructors. They have given a link of “Mesostomatic” - a poem generator and instructed us to generate a poem. I have taken a poem “Pain” by jayanta Mahapatra and copied it in the Mesostomatic - poem generator and I have selected a phrase “Pain to Life” as a spine of my poem.
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Here I am sharing my assignment with reviews:
Stands blood to blood to understand well Pursued over
And the skys
heIghts it holds itself
fast the mist of giviNg my mind
liTtle rest small shelter where are
leaves that cOmmanded heart disturbing those
cLouds
whIch
are the secrets oF
thE sky will my swallowed the sky veil
In this poem the concept of pain has described. The first line /stands blood to blood/ may suggest every human being or also we can say each spice, the understanding of harming each other well. This is the basic fundamental of each spice that if one harms you then the person who victimized by another will take revenge definitely and all social as well as wild animals have better understanding of harming each other. The heights of sky holds the mist, when there is mist our vision is not clear and same when we want to take revenge we only think about giving pain to others, same way when we are in pain we cannot enjoy our life. The mist of revenge and pain has controlled the mind, and heights of sky suggest the ego of a person, and that heights giving mist (unclear vision towards moral values) to the mind of a person.
In the next stanza there is description of a tree, it gives us shelter, so the tree is giving very small and little shelter and when we are in the shelter of someone we are under their control and that is why the line /leaves commanded heart/ has used. Leaves of the shelter have commanded heart but heart is disturbing because of the clouds. Clouds are in the sky and sky contains secrets of the poet. In this stanza the sky is may be the divine God, or it can be consciousness of the poet which is controlled by the agony and suffering; and that sky has swallowed the veil from poet’s emotions and that is why the heart is disturbed but now everything is clear.
The poem is full of metaphors, first is Sky, first it was used to represent ego of the person and we can also connect it with the height of pain, second time it has used as /the secrets oF thE sky will my swallowed the sky veil/ like that ego has swallowed the happiness of life and filled it with pain and another interpretation can be the sky is divine power which has destroyed the ego and gives punishment for sins. The metaphor of Tree used as the turning point in the poem, it can be used negatively as well as positively; may be the shelter has given a sense and because of the commands of leaves the consciousness of poet has evoked. It suggests the journey of pain to life and it is the pain of revenge and illness of mind. One can suffer till the person can feel emotions but when we make ourselves free from our ego and revenge we may get free from pain and get our life.
Here I have shared the screenshot of reviews:
ModPo - Week 8 – some trends in recent poetry L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E
Week 8 was all about language poetry. ModPo has introduced experimental poems in last three weeks and “Language Poetry” is an experimental poetry. The movement emerged in the San Francisco Bay area and New York in the 1970s and 1980s. LANGUAGE poets are known for their blending of "poetry and critical writing about poetry". In this week there were two important poem have been discussed by instructors, first is “Chronic Meanings” by Bob Perelman and second is “My Life” by Lyn Hejinian
Here I
have discussed one language poetry from chapter 9.1 “In a Restless World Like
This Is” by Charles Bernstein.
In a Restless World Like
This Is - Charles Bernstein
Not long ago, or maybe I dreamt it
Or made it up, or have suddenly lost
Track of its train in the hocus pocus
Of the dissolving days; no, if I bend
The turn around the corner, come at it
From all three sides at once, or bounce the ball
Against all manner of bleary-eyed fortune
Tellers—well, you can see for yourselves there’s
Nothing up my sleeves, or notice even
Rocks occasionally break if enough
Pressure is applied. As far as you go
In one direction, all the further you’ll
Have to go on before the way back has
Become totally indivisible.
While
reading this poetry we feel some kind of confusion. In the very first line the
poet is confused that the thing which he is going to discuss was dream or
reality. The words and images in poem distract us from the main concept of
poem. In the last line he concludes his all confusion by saying that you cannot
step back from your present condition. You have to move forward and go on.
Sometimes we are very confident in our life and we move on though we have done
so many mistakes, but this is what the title of the poem suggests. We have to
move on and on. If we will look back, we will lose our path.
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